tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post116275338098064875..comments2008-12-19T13:27:14.264ZWrijuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10794890487028738174noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163596013445637382006-11-15T13:06:00.000Z2006-11-15T13:06:00.000ZThis is lovely poetry and imagery as always, but one mystery for me- what is whispering "sode verce" mean??Trailadyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11170151179814687569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163537587346264832006-11-14T20:53:00.000Z2006-11-14T20:53:00.000ZWhoa !!<BR/><BR/>Looks like you and I were on my blog at the same time, I was putting up a new post and you were reading the old one, and telling me that i hadnt posted for a while !!<BR/><BR/><BR/>Neway,nice of you to drop by.<BR/>A nice blog you've got for yourself. Gonna come back for more.Cinderellahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02977943098333681922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163534458906252972006-11-14T20:00:00.000Z2006-11-14T20:00:00.000Z"......Sepia memories in soft sighs,........every step disintegrates."<BR/><BR/><BR/>Absolutely loved these lines.<BR/><BR/>What a lovely way of conjuring up the melancholy with tenderness !!!!<BR/><BR/>Cant get enough of the phrase 'sepia memories'...what made you think that up???<BR/><BR/>Absolutely delightful !!!Cinderellahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02977943098333681922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163513693913173282006-11-14T14:14:00.000Z2006-11-14T14:14:00.000ZVasu:<BR/>Really :-) Read some Kafka and now I am feeling like an insect. I think too much internalizing can be a bit dangerous.<BR/><BR/>How:<BR/>You are too kind. I have to double check are you really talking about me ;-) Now I really feel like writing more!<BR/><BR/>Eric:<BR/>Thanks!<BR/><BR/>Amu:<BR/>Thanks for dropping by and for your words. I checked your blogs and I think they are quite exceptional, especially your photo blogs.<BR/><BR/>Deepa:<BR/>But Miss Deepa is always the best!Thank you so much :-)<BR/><BR/>Sophie:<BR/>Thanks!Wrijuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10794890487028738174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163369881908141212006-11-12T22:18:00.000Z2006-11-12T22:18:00.000Zso beautiful:)sophiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14497240861882019636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163142897015516082006-11-10T07:14:00.000Z2006-11-10T07:14:00.000Zthis one is wow..just wow...wriju ray u are becoming better day by day..(read it as a poem):-)Deepahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00878258207263249596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163053125076402912006-11-09T06:18:00.000Z2006-11-09T06:18:00.000ZHii dropped by your blog and found something hooking instantly. This piece can claim all that a modern genre of poetry is attributed with. As said by others, it has definitely got similarity with Eliot's imagism and metaphorical symbolism. intellectually the content is very high. I don't want to repeat what otehrs have said, but to me it sounded your vignette of imagination. So the flashback is scurried by the present....mind boggling!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1163021222944066432006-11-08T21:27:00.000Z2006-11-08T21:27:00.000ZVery lovely. ^_^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1162924124631575932006-11-07T18:28:00.000Z2006-11-07T18:28:00.000ZWriju: I havent read Eliot, but this poem in itself, is <BR/>fantastic, in the literal sense of the word! <BR/><BR/>Apart from that, the last line brings even more magic to the picture one creates in one's mind. <BR/><BR/>Somehow, your poems make it easy to visualise them, and they weavea story of their own while we watch with your words.How do we knowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07090037084855151643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1162872521313708662006-11-07T04:08:00.000Z2006-11-07T04:08:00.000ZHmmm...<BR/>I think when you read a lot, you internalise it and as a result find your own voice.<BR/>I definitely think you have your voice that s Wrijustic...<BR/>:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1162802979262894742006-11-06T08:49:00.000Z2006-11-06T08:49:00.000ZThanks Vasu :-)<BR/>But I wish it were not that obvious. I definitely haven't tried to copy him. Every poem I write I start disliking after a while. Then I look for inspiration. Eliot is an amazing poet, and reading him I can't help internalizing his writing. But I'd rather write like myself. Still searching for my own words.<BR/><BR/>Mojindro:<BR/>Thank you!Wrijuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10794890487028738174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1162801784779186012006-11-06T08:29:00.000Z2006-11-06T08:29:00.000Zhey wrijju,<BR/>its such a wonderful peice...<BR/>and that pic is also good...mojindrohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05771422212502168303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15636187.post-1162775083778041832006-11-06T01:04:00.000Z2006-11-06T01:04:00.000Z:-)<BR/><BR/>Very nice. <BR/> <BR/>And its quite obvious shows that you've read a lot of Eliot and got him absorbed into yur system...<BR/><BR/>And,I like the pic...<BR/>Reminds me of the old dungeon that I visted when I was at Mysore.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com